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THE MAP WE ARE NOT ON

Chapter 5. The General

Arefy Stroyev arrived at the party in the fourth week, without an entourage, in two sledges.

Prokop expected the general to bring shouting, reprimands and new deadlines. But a spare man in an unmarked field greatcoat stepped out of the sledge. He unloaded his own crate, brushed the snow from his felt boots at the door of the hut and began by asking not how many versts they had covered.

"The journals."

He read the party's journals until dark. He did not leaf through them: he read them as one reads letters. At the page about the blind ranging pole, he stopped.

"Who found it?"

"A porter," Kapiton said. "Vershinin."

"Send him in."

Prokop entered and stood by the door. The lean, upright general sat at the table and studied him with the same attention he had given the journal.

"Tell me how you saw it."

Prokop told him about the rise, the winter hut under the snow and the true ford. The general listened without interrupting. His face showed neither kindness nor anger, only close attention.

"The Survey needs eyes that care what they see," Stroyev said when Prokop had finished. "Thank you."

Stroyev spoke the words "thank you" with restraint, almost without feeling. But unlike the district clerk, he did not speak from habit: the general seldom wasted words.

"You are literate, I understand. Who taught you?"

"My father. A village schoolmaster."

"Where did he teach?"

Prokop hesitated for only a moment.

"In the eastern districts," he said evenly. "He died last winter."

The general nodded and returned to the journal. The conversation was over. When Prokop reached the door, Stroyev called after him:

"Vershinin, you find blind ranging poles, yet hide who you are." Stroyev did not raise his head from the journal. "See that there is someone who can vouch for your name."

Prokop stepped out into the entrance passage. His shirt was soaked with sweat beneath his greatcoat, though there had been no fire in the hut.

The next day the general inspected the work in the field, and something happened that the party talked about for a week.

Kapiton had set the western baseline for the next traverse along the low bank: the ground was level and convenient. But someone else's memory again helped Prokop see more. Beneath the snow he could make out an oxbow, an ancient loop of the river and a narrow washout channel close against the bank.

In spring the water would take the old channel again. The washout was already widening beneath the snow.

He kept silent for a day. Then he went to Kapiton as though stepping into an ice hole.

"The western baseline will be washed away by May," he said. "There is a washout under the snow by the third ranging pole. When the river breaks up, the bank will subside and the line will be under water."

"How do you know?"

"I can see it," Prokop said, because there was no better word.

Kapiton went to look for himself. He dug at the snow, listened to the ice and stood over the washout for a long time. He returned and reported to the general: the baseline should be moved higher, onto the terrace.

Stroyev heard Kapiton out and looked at Prokop again. This time there was more than passing interest in the general's gaze. There was wary respect.

"Move it," the general said.

That evening the general treated the party, as was his custom. Stroyev sat with the men, ate the same food and asked them about the chain, their boots and how many rusks they used per verst. He spoke seriously to every man, and they straightened without meaning to.

After the third cup, Frol found his courage:

"Your Excellency, is it true a man loses his seal for leaving a blank on a sheet?"

"It is," Stroyev said. "A sheet with a blank is an unfinished sheet. The Survey leaves no blanks."

"But what if there is no way through a place? A bog, a burn?"

"You can pass anywhere you can die," the general said calmly. "If you can die there, you can survey it."

Several men laughed. Later, when the general had gone back to the journals, Kapiton filled his pipe and said to the fire, addressing no one:

"A blank can be left."

Frol turned to him:

"How?"

"An old rule of the guild. From before the Unified Survey." Kapiton drew on his pipe. "A sheet with a blank may be submitted if a man puts his name to it. The guarantor writes his name across the blank and answers for it: beyond that blank there is no settlement, no useful land and no road that he has concealed. If he lies, he loses his right to survey, his name in the guild and everything his trade has earned him."

"Did many men do it?"

"One in a hundred years."

Frol whistled.

"What happened to him?"

Kapiton knocked out his pipe against his heel, rose and went to the sledges to check the seals.

"Time to sleep," he said. "Eight versts tomorrow."

That night Prokop lay awake and listened to the wind moving through the chimney.

Again and again he thought of the white patch where Burn should have been, of the general who did not lie and seemed all the more dangerous for it, and of the old rule: a blank on the map could be preserved if a man vouched for it with his own name.

In the morning the party set off farther east. Stroyev watched them leave from the gate, and as Prokop carried the last crate past him, the general spoke quietly to his back:

"Vershinin. The belt will pass through the locality of Burn. I shall see where you choose to look."

Prokop did not turn round.

It was worse than punishment: the general had remembered his name.

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